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Vektr conversion audit · Calm Canine calming chews
A fictional dog calming-chew brand, real audit format. This is what you get: the score, your biggest leak, the fix order, and the paste-ready rewrite the Fix Pack generates.
Conversion readiness
Major leak. The page is costing ready buyers.
Biggest leak
Outcome-first hero
The hero leads with “Clinically-studied premium calming formula.” A dog owner who clicked an anxiety ad wants one thing, a calmer dog, and the page makes them hunt for it.
Rewrite the headline to the outcome: “Finally, a calmer dog at home.” Move the formula and studies lower, as proof.
Fix order: highest impact first
- 01Outcome-first heroMissing
- 02“Will this work for MY dog?” proofMissing
- 03Risk reversal at the buy buttonMissing
- 04Reviews above the foldPartial
- 05Subscription offer, framedPartial
- 06Mobile-first clarityPartial
- 07Specific outcome statsPartial
- 08Claim-safe copyPartial
The Fix Pack
The rewrite we'd ship.
Same product, same traffic, same price. A page built to convert the buyer who's already there.
“Finally, a calmer dog at home.” (outcome, not formula)
“Vet-formulated calming chews 12,000+ dog owners reorder. Made in the USA, third-party tested.”
★★★★★ 2,140 reviews, shown before any scroll.
Three real owner clips: “my anxious rescue finally settled at night.”
“[your real %] of owners saw a calmer dog within 2 weeks,” sourced from a survey of your own reviews. Never invented.
Subscribe & save 20% (default), “cancel anytime,” free shipping.
“90-day money-back: a calmer dog or your money back,” next to Add to Cart.
Outcome and owner proof only. No “treats anxiety / cures” language.
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